Sunday, 15 February 2015

Poem

Loud noises


Feet stomping, bones breaking,the crowdClapping, the monstrous motorcycle Motors Roaring,ring master screaming


Wind


I felt the coldness grabbing me from behind

as the wind whistled through my hair silently


Motorcycles


I could see the raging motorcycles doing amazing

Tricks twisting and turning up and down back and

forth they were everywhere some were incredible

Some were outstanding it was amazing


Fireworks


There were fireworks exploding everywhere

They were red and blue but my favourite is

The big bold yellow one they were very close

Up they were almost touching me I was very happy and a huge grin came across my face


4 comments:

  1. Well done on getting your blog underway for 2015. I am looking forward to reading more. Mr A.

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  2. great poem you have a lot of great words you maybe should be a book writer. really felt the the excitement from this poem. -Aryan Biala

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    1. thank you i was screaming my head off thats how exited i was

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