Monday, 14 March 2016

Anonymous cat

Anonymous cat

The cat
Hides his unpleasant                        

The breeze 
Is a comb that brushes
The cat's fur.

The grass
Is a family greeting him 
when it sways in the wind

What crimes has he made?
Does he feel guilty?
What lies behind his pixelated eyes?

My reflection
I am learning about similes and metaphor. My writing is relational because I can write similes or metaphors that connect to create an image or an emotion. My next step is to be able to help others and extend one metaphor through my whole poem.



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